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Common mistakes in online matrimonial profiles

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Looking for a life partner for yourself or your son/daughter on matrimony sites  like Shaadi.com, Bharatmatrimony.com, Jeevansathi.com, etc.? Finding it difficult to write your matrimonial profile?

You've come to the right place. We can help you fix your existing profile; or write an entirely new online matrimonal profile for you.

Most people are not good at describing themselves. In online matrimonial profiles, they are even worse. They tend to mention things in their profiles which they would never tell someone if they met them in person. The average matrimonial profile is littered with:

  • incessant rambling about a favorite TV show, a Bollywood Actor or a Cricket Star (would you REALLY choose a partner based on that?)
  • subjective self-descriptive phrases like “I am honest, creative, and intelligent...(who doesn't think so about themselves? )
  • not being specific in the kind of person you would like to marry. e.g.I prefer marrying someone Punjabi, but if are Tamil/NRI, write me anyway, maybe you can change my mind (don't play both sides of the coin, neither Punjabi nor Tamil/NRI people would respond to you. Better not to say anything if you are not sure.)

Matrimonial profiles on the Internet are often full of irrelevant or useless things, and lack the information  which is important in choosing a life partner. Such profiles do not get responses from the right people (or anyone!), making people lose faith in the power of the Internet to find a mate.

What should you write in your profile? Your life history, your goals, your achievements? Should you talk in detail about your family? Should you mention about your feelings, emphasizing your sensitive, emotional side?  What are people looking for - the important things - when they are browsing all those ads online? What in your ad "clicks" with them, so they actually write to you?

It is the combination of representing you accurately, and knowing what people like to read in matrimonial profiles, which forms the basis for the profile writing services we offer you.

At MatrimonialProfile.com, we are not  interested in creating a "new" you, but working with who you are. By putting the right stuff out there (and taking out the wrong stuff) we can significantly increase your chances of getting quality responses to your matrimonial ad. The key is to tell about yourself and what you are looking for concisely- because people are "browsing" through a lot of ads- with a clean and informative profile full of substance, which is what we can help you write. With our extensive experience in profile writing, you can be sure that you have chosen the right people to write your profile.

Profile Review Rs.2600 or US$59

We review your matrimonial profile and give you our comments and suggestions:

  • Identify and remove the common mistakes (see examples mistakes)
  • Unbiased and candid assessment of your photos. Having looked at hundreds of matrimonial photographs, we rate your photos on a 4-level scale: below average, average, above average and excellent.
  • Specific ideas on what more you should talk about in your profile so people can get to know the real you and the kind of partner you are looking for.

You come back and show us the updated ad and we send you a second email recommending any final changes, including checking the ad for spelling and grammar mistakes, and suggestions to improve the flow and style of your ad to make it a friendly and casual read.

Complete Profile Write Rs.4300 or US$99

We send you a questionnaire by email. The questionnaire is designed to stimulate you to think about yourself so we can get to know who you really are and what you are looking for. Based on your answers, we write an ad profile for you and you upload it to your internet matrimonial site (you will also get an unbiased and candid assessment of your photos).

 

Good photos are an important part of a personal profile, and we can optimize and enhance your photos so you look your bestIf you are a newcomer to the online matrimony board and don't know what they mean by .bmp, .jpg, .gif, photo size, pixels, etc., you can take a photo in your digital camera and send it to us "as is"- we will take it from there and optimize it for your matrimonial site (reducing the size, adjusting the format, digitally enhancing it-adjusting the brightness, contrast, color balance and saturation, etc.). Photo Enhancements are Rs.1000 or US$20 per photo.

Also buy photo enhancements if you think that the photos where you look your best are with other people or with too many other things in the background; the other people or backgrounds can be "removed" or faded digitally in most cases, so only you show in the final photos.

Click here to order your Profile Review or Profile Write




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